Saturday, 12 January 2013

I is for... Icicle

Water arrested
En route. Clouds exhale sunshine:
Drip, drip to the earth.
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3 comments:

  1. Zoe12 January 2013 at 03:36

    Jaime - if you happen to have an arty shot of an icicle, this haiku would make a cracking flash and zoom, don't you think?

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  2. Jaime13 January 2013 at 11:29

    Snap, I thought exactly the same! I wonder if I could create one somehow...

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  3. Kerry L13 January 2013 at 21:13

    The best part about this is the contrast between things being fixed and then released, the word exhale rooting this - a great haiku :)

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